peer review thank's to nick

VIDEO:

1] Narrative/Thematics
Theoretical framework and the strength of initial investigation
Story boarding, visual research, testing of ideas and initial investigation into max
_7__/10
Comments:

Your investigation ideas have been very interesting particularly with transformation, and poetic reference to the bird.


2] Max Component
Complexity of form and motion. Conceptualization of source imagery/documentation, testing methods and processes of form generation etc.
_7.5__/10
Comments:

Use of form shows investigation however could be more abstract than literal. This would also tie in with aspects of investigation. Also there is a lack of camera techniques and movement which could have made the animation more striking.


3] Video Editing Component
Structure of narrative, background/foreground resolution, integration of source images, text and sound into animation. Resolution/readability of work and concepts.
__7_/10
Comments:
Great set of images. However I do not see much a link with the gugenhreim and scrunched paper in your animation that offer more abstract interpretation.



Misc comments:

A nice calm poetic animation. Should further apply such feelings in a more abstract sense.