Friday, September 26, 2008
Thursday, September 18, 2008
peer review thank's to nick
VIDEO:
1] Narrative/Thematics
Theoretical framework and the strength of initial investigation
Story boarding, visual research, testing of ideas and initial investigation into max
_7__/10
Comments:
Your investigation ideas have been very interesting particularly with transformation, and poetic reference to the bird.
2] Max Component
Complexity of form and motion. Conceptualization of source imagery/documentation, testing methods and processes of form generation etc.
_7.5__/10
Comments:
Use of form shows investigation however could be more abstract than literal. This would also tie in with aspects of investigation. Also there is a lack of camera techniques and movement which could have made the animation more striking.
3] Video Editing Component
Structure of narrative, background/foreground resolution, integration of source images, text and sound into animation. Resolution/readability of work and concepts.
__7_/10
Comments:
Great set of images. However I do not see much a link with the gugenhreim and scrunched paper in your animation that offer more abstract interpretation.
Misc comments:
A nice calm poetic animation. Should further apply such feelings in a more abstract sense.
1] Narrative/Thematics
Theoretical framework and the strength of initial investigation
Story boarding, visual research, testing of ideas and initial investigation into max
_7__/10
Comments:
Your investigation ideas have been very interesting particularly with transformation, and poetic reference to the bird.
2] Max Component
Complexity of form and motion. Conceptualization of source imagery/documentation, testing methods and processes of form generation etc.
_7.5__/10
Comments:
Use of form shows investigation however could be more abstract than literal. This would also tie in with aspects of investigation. Also there is a lack of camera techniques and movement which could have made the animation more striking.
3] Video Editing Component
Structure of narrative, background/foreground resolution, integration of source images, text and sound into animation. Resolution/readability of work and concepts.
__7_/10
Comments:
Great set of images. However I do not see much a link with the gugenhreim and scrunched paper in your animation that offer more abstract interpretation.
Misc comments:
A nice calm poetic animation. Should further apply such feelings in a more abstract sense.
Wednesday, September 17, 2008
PREMISE
Transition between spaces determined by the use of wall (fence) combining with the idea of turning back to nature from modern civilization by using trees and stone as main material. experiencing journey through the changing. Changing the environment and the way of seeing something. The changes then will return to the original as time past as if trapped in the complicated road of the city like a never ending journey.
Thursday, September 4, 2008
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